Interested
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4 Sentences: Summary of my plot narrative (version 1)
My short film is going to be a psychological thriller which is going to play with the audiences mind. The main character is going to be a male student around 18 years of age, having a disturbing but also alluring dream which is constantly playing with his state of mind, to the point where the character/audience can't tell the difference between reality and dreaming. I'm planinng to include a lot of diverse driving shots/angles.
Feedback indicates: explains concept and style but doesn't explain plot summary clearly.
I focused more on the style than the location/action/conclusion/outcome.
Summary of my plot narrative (version 2)
My shot film is going to be a psychological thriller which is going to play with the audiences mind. The main character is going to be a male student around 18 years of age, having a disturbing but also alluring dream which is constantly playing around with his 'sane' state of mind. The character is going to experience a dream where he is driving around a rural country side in the dark, and it seems where ever he drives he ends up in the same, creepy and irregular place. As soon as he gets there he wakes up, where all he thinks about is the place, if it exsists and what would happen if he didn't wake up. This will end up with the character not knowing if hes dreaming of if he's awake, and hopefull will confuse the audience. I'm planning on using a lot of diverse driving shots and possibly a backing track from 'Kid A' to accompany the un natural setting/feeling.
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